Overall, not bad! The ending was kinda borked… I woulda ended it on a darker note… what happens next? I doubt they would turn off such a “perfect” system so quickly!
But yeah, a season 2 with journalists from 2009 facing AI advances would be great and fit into the three timelines format well, I think. They’ll likely drop the show, though.
You said it was written with help from ChatGPT? I could almost see it in the framing / pacing … Personally, even GPT-4 (or especially GPT-4 chat?), the LLM misses a lot of things when it comes to details, but it’s good at big picture planning and outlining…
(I recently tried to coax some foreshadowing out of it, explained it’s chapter 2 and we’re revealing in chapter 40 and to be very subtle, and it actually put in something like, “This detail made Hunter realize big changes would be happening in later chapters…” Hah!
I really, really want a GPT-4-instruct for long-form fiction… The 128k context is nice, but it still borks a lot because of how it was trained, I think.