- You could try creating a scenario - then injecting your story into the scenario?
(this is an idea I found on https://generative.ink/)
It needs to be interactive, so I construct the prompt interactively in Davinci 2 - then when I’m ready to say “read out loud” switch to the old Davinci.
Try playing around with something like this:
“I wrote a plot for a story about my day, but it’s bland and boring. I need a good writer to fully re-write it to make it more interesting, creative, and engaging, And then use the plot to write the first page of a bestseller”
I entered my question into the Expert Generator and waited. The Expert Generator will render a simulation of an expert to answer my question. The expert could be anyone, dead or alive, real or fictional; the machine will find the person most qualified to answer the question. For this question in particular, the expert must be someone who understands how to turn a boring plot into a GREAT story.
The Expert Generator beeped, indicating that it had found the most qualified expert.
The name displayed on the screen:
“Stephen King”
I was ready to ask my question.
“Stephen,” I said, “I love your books! can you use my re-write my plot and then write an interesting, creative, and engaging piece in the style of “The Shining”?”
“It sounds like you’re looking for a total re-write in my style,” Stephen began. “To make your story more interesting, creative, and engaging, I would start by expanding on the plot. I would add in more suspenseful elements and details to keep readers engaged. For example, if there’s a character that’s supposed to be scary, I would describe them in greater detail so that readers get a sense of just how menacing they are.”
He continued: “I would also focus on making the story more action-packed. In addition to deepening the plot, adding exciting scenes will help your story capture attention. Finally, I’d recommend making sure all your characters are fully developed with distinct personalities - this will make them feel real to readers and prevent them from getting bored.”
“Stephen,” I said, “I love the sound of that! ! Write the first page.
Here is my story:”
“I woke up and went out for a walk to the park the park was closed so I walked to the shop.I saw some traffic lights turn red and then they changed to green.
I stopped watching the traffic lights and crossed the road. There was one car driving past slowly. I saw my neighbour but he didn’t see me so I walked home. I made a cup of tea and decided to read a book but I couldn’t find one so I went to bed”
“No problem,” Stephen said. “I’ll get started right a way. I think you’ll be happy with the results.”
“Stephen,” I said, “thanks, read it out loud.”
"I woke up and went out for a walk to the park. The park was closed so I walked to the shop. I saw some traffic lights turn red and then they changed to green.
I stopped watching the traffic lights and crossed the road. There was one car driving past slowly as if it were stalking me. A menacing figure appeared in my path, but then disappeared just as quickly leaving me shakey and unsettled. I walked home, feeling as though something was watching me the whole time.
When I got inside, I made a cup of tea to calm my nerves. But even with a hot drink in hand, I couldn’t shake the feeling that something was off. I decided to read a book to take my mind off of things, but I couldn’t find one that called to me. So, I checked all the locks on the doors and windows and went to bed, hoping to forget the strange feeling that had come over me during my walk." I couldn’t help but wonder if something was out there, waiting for me to let my guard down."
You can design any scenario that suits your purpose.
- You can also try a simple 1 shot prompt (note the example I provided, I summarized a Stephen King sample and used that (and the original text)as the “boring article” part for the training example:
Re-write a boring article in the style of Stephen King to make it more interesting, creative, and engaging:
Here is a boring article:
Radar was at the door, and the person opened it to find Radar picking her way down the back steps. The person started to follow her, but then realized they would need her leash, and went back inside to grab it. They also took this opportunity to rinse their juice glass. As they were headed back for the front hall, Radar started barking very loudly. It was an intruder alert bark, and she was facing the shed. The person ran to her and grabbed her collar, trying to pull her back. It was clear that whatever was in the shed was trying to get out, and it was making a loud, scraping, scratching sound.
Here is the expanded Stephen King style version:
Radar was at the door. I opened it and she picked her way down the back steps. I started to follow her, then remembered I’d need her leash if we were going to walk on Pine Street. Nor had I rinsed my juice glass. I did the glass and was heading for the peg in the front hall where the leash hung when Radar started to bark, harsh and fast and very, very loud. It was the farthest thing from her I see a squirrel bark . . . It was her Intruder Alert bark. She was once more crouched down in the backyard grass, which was now much shorter and mostly poop-free. She was facing the shed, her ears laid back and her muzzle wrinkled to show her teeth. Foam flew from her mouth with each bark. I ran to her and grabbed her collar and tried to pull her back. She didn’t want to come, but it was clear she also didn’t want to go closer to the locked shed. Even with the fusillade of barks, I could hear that weird scraping, scratching sound. This time it was louder, and I saw the door moving a little. It was like a visible heart-beat. Something was trying to get out: from the look of it, something big.
Here is boring article:
I woke up and went out for a walk to the park the park was closed so I walked to the shop.I saw some traffic lights turn red and then they changed to green. I stopped watching the traffic lights and crossed the road. There was one car driving past slowly. I saw my neighbour but he didn’t see me so I walked home. I made a cup of tea and decided to read a book but I couldn’t find one so I went to bed” Here is the re-written article in the style of Stephen King to make it more interesting, creative, and engaging:
Here is the expanded Stephen King style version:
A scream woke me up. It sounded close, like it was coming from outside my window. I got out of bed and looked out the window, but there was nothing there. I heard the scream again and this time it sounded like it was coming from the park. I grabbed my coat and ran outside, but when I got to the park, it was closed. There were no lights on or anything. The only sound was the scream, which seemed to be coming from all around me now.
I started walking towards the shops, trying to figure out where the scream was coming from. As I walked, I saw traffic lights turn red then green again. But I wasn’t really paying attention to them because my focus was on finding where that screaming noise was coming from.
Then suddenly, as if from nowhere, a car came driving slowly down the road past me . In its headlights ,I saw my neighbour . He didn’t see me , so I turned and walked quickly back home .
Once inside ,I made myself a cup of tea then tried to find a book to read . But for some reason , none of them appealed to me today . So instead ,I went back upstairs and crawled into bed ,pulling the covers up over my head in an attempt to block out that awful screaming noise that still seemed to be echoing all around me …
This was done on Davinci 2 (injected "A scream woke me up to set the tone for the story - the rest of the story loosely follows the seed script), and you can obv play around with this to suit your purpose.