can you score my writing based on IELTS band description for task 2 academic writing and then tell me overall score, in addition to correcting my mistakes in each section.
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can you score my writing based on IELTS band description for task 2 academic writing and then tell me overall score, in addition to correcting my mistakes in each section.
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Nowadays, people like easy work, they do not like spent many times for path to recive their want.Actually, small malls have not a lot of stuff but other hand shopping mall have a lot of types clothes, instruments, even entertainment and when people go into malls can find every things their want.I will undarestaned advantages and disadvantages then say my view a bout that.
Actually, we can see a lot of market, local shops and shopping malls, but why people like to choose malls.When you go local shops just you can buy one type of things, for sample you need shoes and t-shirt and you go to local shops,for buy both of them you should find two shops two different places and this is very get your time and it is very boring but if you go to malls, you will found every thing you need in a same place.
Malls have a lot options and for this options,there is a populler place, for example they have a free parking for your cars, cinema, large supermarket, fast food and resturant, bowling alloys, some places for your kids,however, and they have high securty. Az a lazy person i like the malls i do not need spend many times for find things i am need.
I strongly believe as soon as possible every local shops closed, and instead of shops build a big mall, full option mall, too
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